I haven’t gotten many comments from people. The one that did stand out to me was one made by Dylan Wilson.
The other comments just had the normal “nice job with a little criticism. But this one express an idea, which immediately caught my eye. I fully agree that our generation is just used to typing out our stories in Essays when I feel like our English teachers can really test their students by having them perform proper English through speech. However I am at fault here because I did read off of a script I made just to make my story go smoother.
And here are my comments to other people. Due note that the time on the comments are somehow 3 hours ahead of what they should be. I think our websites are hosted in a time zone that’s 3 time zones East of the east coast. It is Currently 9:30 PM on June 5th.